Yourstruly

It was long, but I really liked it!

There are quite a few errors, though. For instance, at one point they say they’re going to get married on a certain day. Then she goes to meet his dad, he comes over for dinner, and they’re in Greece. Later, on the wedding day, they’re out in the fields with their friends, and the text makes it sound as though they’re getting married on the same day they originally said they would.

It sounds a bit strange and confusing. I think the timeline could be clearer.