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Jim Mercurio

The Craft of Scene Writing

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    Here are additional questions that you can ask of your dialogue as you write:

    • What is the line’s purpose?

    • Can I express the beat with an action, gesture, or reaction?
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    Very few writers can write great dialogue from the start. Great dialogue writing is a craft to be learned and developed.
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    However, after you repeat this process a few times, you develop a habit, internalize the process, and eventually, it becomes an organic tool of your craft
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    Obviously, you won’t put every line of dialogue you write through the same wringer.
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    Personally, none of the lines except for the line in the film impresses me.
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    Eliminations: Is this a meet-and-greet or a meet-and-kill? / You fellas got something swirling around your heads, seem a bit nervous. / The number of horses you brought… ah, yikes! / Snaky, you look shaky. / Four of us, three horses, always a bridesmaid. / Three of you? I told Frank I travel light. / Shouldn’t you, you know, have one more horse than you do?
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    Eliminations: Is this a meet-and-greet or a meet-and-kill? / You fellas got something swirling around your heads, seem a bit nervous. / The number of horses you brought… ah, yikes! / Snaky, you look shaky. / Four of us, three horses, always a bridesmaid. / Three of you? I told Frank I travel light. / Shouldn’t you, you know, have one more horse than you do?
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    Which ones avoid being on the nose?

    Eliminations: Are you here to kill me? / Is this a meet-and-greet or a meet-and-kill? / Am I to deduce from the number of horses that you plan to kill me? / Are you going to kill me?
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    Which ones capture the subtext clearly?

    Eliminations: A surprise party? You shouldn’t have. / The number of horses you brought… ah, yikes! / So who’s walking? / Three of you? I told Frank I travel light.
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    Are you here to kill me? / Shouldn’t you have one more horse than you do? / Shouldn’t you have one more horse? / A surprise party? You shouldn’t have. / Is this a meet-and-greet or a meet-and-kill? / You fellas got something swirling around your heads, seem a bit nervous. / Am I to deduce from the number of horses that you plan to kill me? / The number of horses you brought… ah, yikes! / Are you going to kill me? / Snaky, you look shaky. / Four of us, three horses, always a bridesmaid. / So who’s walking? / Three of you? I told Frank I travel light. / You bring a horse for me?
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